Friday, March 21, 2014
Ashlee, Mele and Annliz Article on Flight MH370 disappearance
The Malaysia Airlines flight 370 disappeared on the 8th of march 2014 and the malaysian air force are still searching from this day forward. Before they even knew that something was going wrong the flight was scheduled to depart from Kuala Lampur, Malaysia and was supposed to land in Beijing but did not show. They tried to see what happened and after hours of searching to try and find it to see where it was it dissapeared off the radar they then thoughtit was lost in the air.
For the last week the air force was searching all around the area where it was supposed to go. Later in the week the search kept continuing until they came to there senses. Everybody that was part of the search team had there own opinions the main scenarios was that the plane had been hijacked, had a pilot error or crashed.
In the search they found that the plane had two people with stolen passports and tried to see if they might have been suspects in to the crime or if they were victims.They did background checks and busted into their homes but did not find any evidence of them being a part of the crimes.
The search still continued and each day they are still uncovering new clues on who hijacked it and where the plane is. They have some clues on who has hijacked it and are now trying to find out why and where.
My thoughts on the Hijack of the plane is ridiculous because where would they hide it and what will they do with it.
Wednesday, March 19, 2014
Show not Tell
Here are my show not tell stories
Nervous Show Not Tell
After trying out for the netball team Keri was trembling with fear to see if she had made it in or not . It came to the day when they announced the team. The coach had scribbled in the breeze on the notice board the names of the people who made it.
With every step Keri took closer to the board, she began to feel nauseous and faint. With only a few steps to go she couldn't see her name. She dashed to the to the toilet in panic, slamming the door. She calmed down and tried to gain her confidence back. She walked back in the hall with goosebumps and finally saw her name on the board. She jumped up with joy and sprinted to tell the world.
Angry Show Not Tell
OMG you’re going to the mall, said Emily to her older sister Laura with excitement, Yes why are you asking? Well I thought I could come, said Emily with puppy dog eyes, then NO the sister said and slammed the door well she continued getting ready to go. By that time Emily was in rage she clenched her fist and turned red slamming her fist against the door to try and open it.
Stop it yelled the sister you're so frustrating you always get what you want but this time you can’t because you are too young, said Laura with a straightner in her hand. Now they both were in Rage by that point. Mum yelled and told Laura to come because Emily was throwing a fit in the lounge. I want to come said Emily and Laura just walked out the door without a single care.
Here is a story that I made into a Show not Tell. My stories are the bold and green pieces
Mary was excited because her older sister Jan was going to take her shopping at the mall to get a new dress. Jan told Mary they would leave in a few minutes but Mary said she couldn't find her shoes. Jan was getting impatient and Mary was worried that she would leave without her.
Mary was jumping up and down her mom caught her and stopped her and’ asked “why are you so happy” Mum said trying to hold her down. Mary broke out and screamed “ i’m going to the mall to get a new dress’ mary said while hoping away. As wind was blowing the mom away she asked mary if she had her shoes. Mary ran into her room with panic slamming the door behind her.
Jan her older sister, kept yelling and telling her to hurry up well beeping the horn and tapping on the Steering wheel. Paranoia struck Mary as she was worried she was going to get left behind because she could'nt find her shoes. Lifting the last sheet Mary finally found her shoes but Jan was to impatient and decided to leave her behind.
It was the last minute of the finals match of the basketball competition. Tama was shooting 3 penalty shots but misses and his team loses. He feels like he has let the whole team down. When one of his team jokes about it sarcastically Tama over-reacts and loses it.
5,4,3…. shoot it Tama! It was the basketball competition and it was the last minute when Tama missed. Oh no you missed kicking the drink bottle , its ok you will get it soon. Tama was angry with himself because he felt like he had let his team down. When Tama returned to the team with sweat dripping he heard one of the team members joking about Tama’s failure. Tama heard and lost the plot, his face turned red and he clenched his fist. The coach saw and sent him to go and cool down.
Nervous Show Not Tell
After trying out for the netball team Keri was trembling with fear to see if she had made it in or not . It came to the day when they announced the team. The coach had scribbled in the breeze on the notice board the names of the people who made it.
With every step Keri took closer to the board, she began to feel nauseous and faint. With only a few steps to go she couldn't see her name. She dashed to the to the toilet in panic, slamming the door. She calmed down and tried to gain her confidence back. She walked back in the hall with goosebumps and finally saw her name on the board. She jumped up with joy and sprinted to tell the world.
Angry Show Not Tell
OMG you’re going to the mall, said Emily to her older sister Laura with excitement, Yes why are you asking? Well I thought I could come, said Emily with puppy dog eyes, then NO the sister said and slammed the door well she continued getting ready to go. By that time Emily was in rage she clenched her fist and turned red slamming her fist against the door to try and open it.
Stop it yelled the sister you're so frustrating you always get what you want but this time you can’t because you are too young, said Laura with a straightner in her hand. Now they both were in Rage by that point. Mum yelled and told Laura to come because Emily was throwing a fit in the lounge. I want to come said Emily and Laura just walked out the door without a single care.
Here is a story that I made into a Show not Tell. My stories are the bold and green pieces
Mary was excited because her older sister Jan was going to take her shopping at the mall to get a new dress. Jan told Mary they would leave in a few minutes but Mary said she couldn't find her shoes. Jan was getting impatient and Mary was worried that she would leave without her.
Mary was jumping up and down her mom caught her and stopped her and’ asked “why are you so happy” Mum said trying to hold her down. Mary broke out and screamed “ i’m going to the mall to get a new dress’ mary said while hoping away. As wind was blowing the mom away she asked mary if she had her shoes. Mary ran into her room with panic slamming the door behind her.
Jan her older sister, kept yelling and telling her to hurry up well beeping the horn and tapping on the Steering wheel. Paranoia struck Mary as she was worried she was going to get left behind because she could'nt find her shoes. Lifting the last sheet Mary finally found her shoes but Jan was to impatient and decided to leave her behind.
It was the last minute of the finals match of the basketball competition. Tama was shooting 3 penalty shots but misses and his team loses. He feels like he has let the whole team down. When one of his team jokes about it sarcastically Tama over-reacts and loses it.
5,4,3…. shoot it Tama! It was the basketball competition and it was the last minute when Tama missed. Oh no you missed kicking the drink bottle , its ok you will get it soon. Tama was angry with himself because he felt like he had let his team down. When Tama returned to the team with sweat dripping he heard one of the team members joking about Tama’s failure. Tama heard and lost the plot, his face turned red and he clenched his fist. The coach saw and sent him to go and cool down.
Friday, March 14, 2014
Holiday Highlight
The glorious beach of Eastern Bay sends waves whooshing a shore as me and my family arrive. We unpack the car and headed on to the sand for a swim in king tide. Taking of our top clothes as we had already got changed at home we ran into the water like we only had five minutes left.
Jumping in the water it was freezing cold but once you got used to it it was like a pool at a lagoon. We floated around and started to go out farer and deeper because the tide wasn't fully in. We started to choke up sea water as we were playing games.
My aunty arrived and as she did her partner came running in to the water with a volley ball and we started to play volley ball in the water. A few minutes later we got out and started playing cricket except for me. I played with my two little cousins we built sandcastles and then decorated it with shells.
After that the tide was beginning to go out so we packed up and got in the car and drove to a park and got some fish and chips we had relays and played on the park that was my favourite holiday highlight because I got to spend time with my family.
Katy Perry Video Offence
Katy Perry’s Dark Horse
Katy Perry is a successful singer who has won grammys, Oscars, and plenty of other awards.She is age 29 and in her years of music and craziness no one has ever seen her gone this bad.
When her video was first released Dark Horse with Juicy J that was the first act of her bad streak. Also there was a lot of offence from the religion Islam because if you look at the video it shows her being powerful than god. Islam was offended because that is a religious town who believe in God and Jesus and she just disrespected that because of all the illuminati signs and scenes where she was more powerful than god.
Yes You read it right Katy Perry did have scenes in her video that offended God. If you would like to see the video Dark Horse and see what all the commotions is go on youtube and watch the video.
Tuesday, March 11, 2014
Bio Poem's Ashlee
Ashlee,
Ashlee,
Child of Janette and Kelvin.
Who loves Chocolate, Netball, Horrors and Puppies.
Who hates Buses, Dolls.
Who wants to go to Niue and Rarotonga.
Who wishes she could've met.
Who is scared of Piranhas and Snakes.
Who dreams of Being a Baker.
Who is determined to get her brother into rugby.
Who values her culture.
Who is proud of Mya because she is friendly.
Who graduated from Kindergarten.
Who lives in Meadowbank.
Who wish she could meet Anna Olsen to help inspire her dream.
Who wish she could meet Anna Olsen to help inspire her dream.
Ash
Ashlee,
I am Ashlee
I am 12 years old
I am a daughter of…
Kelvin and Janette
I am the sister of...
Connor
I am a niece of…
Many Aunties
I am a Netball Player...
For both club and school
I am interested in Baking…
Because I like the taste and smell
Monday, March 3, 2014
The Lyttleton Summary
This is my summary of the article of the Lyttleton tunnel. The Lyttleton tunnel has recently been in the news. It has been on the news because it is celebrating the 50Th anniversary. Lyttleton tunnel has came to the 50 year mark. It is a happy time for the Lyttleton tunnel fans. Lyttleton Tunnel is in Christchurch and is one of the most biggest tunnels in New Zealand.
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