Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Show not tell setting

Waking up from a deep sleep I see a little tint of light from under my door. Walking towards my bedroom door I open it with only half an eye open to see a light was on in the toilet.  “ Nothing to worry about no burglars,” I say to myself while returning back to my cozy bed. I lay there for a while listening to the music that's emerging from the speakers next door. I can hear voices and music continuing  “What is going on? “ I say to myself.

I walk towards my window with despair thinking that I’m not going to go to sleep. I touch the window pain and can feel how wet it is I breath on the window making a ghost. Suddenly the wind starts to go whoosh swaying the trees from side to side. Running back to my bed I quickly slide under the covers digging my toes into the mink blanket. I could tell that it was the middle of winter

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