As
I was driving the car something brushed up against my foot and my
surprise turned to horror as I looked down and saw Mya and Robert the
two scariest marshmallow people to ever arrive in the universe . “HAH” .
Screaming of horror and help . I couldn’t stop just looking at their
horrifying face . As their pale white faces and their creepy stubby
little noses along with their big googly eyes and there horrifying
mouths . Going gupgup guggg trying to speak marshall language . Taking
the car away to their own land . Where alot of candy were . I was just
thinking about how yum they would taste if I could escape .
There I saw the yummiest ever M&Ms Called martha and Myas twin . I
couldn’t wait to eat them but before I could I found myself in a dark
room covered in chocolate and jelly beans I managed to gobble and drink
some up but . I got pulled away like I imagined those M&Ms I saw .
But I was too busy looking at their world . There I saw the two jelly
beans pink Martha & purple Giselle .
When
I went through the last machine with Chloe my friend . Turned into
chocolate thumbs . We looked the same like everybody says . We
couldn’t stop comparing our self . But then we stopped as we were
starting to get body’s . We started to make alot of friends . Without
the idea of eating them now we were one of them . We decided to see
their true colors . That they were EVIL .
We
then ran into the room caught up in all the mess happening.
Getting
too carried away and keeping on walking then we ran into WILLY Floss .
He told everybody to empty their sugar pockets . And there was alot
coming out of their pockets . The sound was shshshshshshsh shshshsh when
it came to us you could only hear . Thump Thump Thump . That wasn’t
even from us that was from him . And his candy cane feet . Faster then a
flash he had already scooped us up or should I say tangled in candy
floss .
Problem : Candy was evil and they trapped us and we wanted to eat them .
Solution : He ate us and put us out of our misery .
Hey Ashlee,
ReplyDeleteThat sounded like it was very scary!!!! I hope that you can post another writing and I can also comment on it!!
Keep it up!!!
Love Asena