On Sunday when we went to the fun fest to get out of the house, I was so excited that when we walked passed the gate I ran to the KamaKazi
The KamaKazi looked like 2 big hot dogs that move in a half circle and an actual circle. Inside people go in. There are 16 seats on each side. My Auntie & I where in the front. I was laughing before it started but in the middle I was frightened. My stomach was sore from the metal belts.
After, we went to the roundup. My Auntie was scared, Dad thought that I would be the one to be scared but it was my auntie. My Auntie didn't want to go on any more because she was too scared. We all laughed at her. I felt brave because of my auntie
Great first post Ashlee. The Kamakazee sounds scary, I think I would probably feel sick if I went on it so I think I know how your aunty was feeling. Do you think you could put a space after every fullstop? It makes it easier to read.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work.